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Heartaches and mistakes
Pave the sidewalks in this small town
Bruises and screaming
Built the rooms of this cold house
Silence and smiles
Mask from everyone what you really feel
Boxes and belongings
Stacked in your car as you're leaving
Windows and tears flow
Eyes that watch as you've had enough of
Beatings and bleeding
Every night when you thought I was sleeping
Empty words and promises
You won't be back, I know that
Escape and think straight
But you left one thing behind,
Me
4/19/12
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a-black-grave Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is a powerful piece! Extemely sad. The rhythm is awesome here, very.... jazzy or bluesy maybe? I don't know, it is very unique and I feel like that unique rhythm is what drew me into this. It reminds me of the rhythm used in the album Bone Machine by Tom Waits.
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CelesteCorinne Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it.
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a-black-grave Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome :)
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OniOfTheShade Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012   General Artist
I really like the rhythm you've created in this.. and that last line, though the shortest, felt the most powerful. Like POW! "Me."
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CelesteCorinne Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much.
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OniOfTheShade Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012   General Artist
You're very welcome!
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